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« on: September 26, 2017, 03:07:30 PM »

PodCastle 489: Emshalur’s Hand Stays

by Anaea Lay
read by Cian Mac Mahon
hosted by Setsu Uzume

A PodCastle Original!

Rated PG-13

I returned to Irishem with three sources of power: a letter from Kelian, a clear memory of why I left, and the space between my hands. The letter proved my right to enter as a citizen at the outer gate. It also got me past the boy keeping Kelian’s door when I arrived, though the house was closed for the evening. “Sealed save for family and Emshalur,” go the ritual words of denial.

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Anaea Lay lives in Seattle, Washington where she writers, cooks, plays board games, reads too much, and sells real estate under another name. She’s the fiction podcast editor for Strange Horizons where you can hear her read a new short story nearly every week. Her fiction work has appeared in a variety of venues including Lightspeed, Apex, Beneath Ceaseless Skies, and PodCastle.

Cian is an Irish software engineer, photographer, blogger, and sometimes-traveller.

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« Reply #1 on: October 01, 2017, 08:37:55 PM »

I never did catch on to what was happening with any confidence. I think I could take a stab at the physical outcome but don't know why.
 
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« Reply #2 on: October 15, 2017, 07:44:09 PM »

I had to read the story before commenting.  I was excited that the story had an Irish narrator... and then terribly disappointed at the near monotone of the delivery.  It made the story a bit hard to follow.  Couldn't always tell when one character gave way to another in the dialogue.  Couldn't always tell if the main character was talking out loud or narrating to us internally (which is why I had to read it).  Then he goes from talking about himself in the first person to talking about himself in the third person... or I was more lost than I think and he was actually talking about someone else.   I think I'd like to hear the story with a different narrator to see if that helps.
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