Escape Artists
November 22, 2017, 09:40:52 AM *
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.

Login with username, password and session length
News: The FINAL ROUND of the PseudoPod Flash Fiction Contest has begun!
 
   Home   Help Search Login Register  
Pages: [1]
  Print  
Author Topic: EP601: Wet Fur  (Read 114 times)
eytanz
Moderator
*****
Posts: 5857



« on: November 14, 2017, 10:30:28 AM »

Escape Pod 601: Wet Fur

AUTHOR: Jeremiah Tolbert
NARRATOR: Adam Pracht
HOST: Tina Connolly

---

You can tell the dog owners when they board the plane; they see the black cloud hovering in the first row and their eyes widen in shock, then narrow in fear, followed by a glimmer of a smile, a hope as they glance at so many occupied seats. A hopeful smile that seems to say: “not for me. Not for mine.”

Unease settles over the plane, like a heavy, acrid scent. A few passengers throw suspicious glances at you, and one elderly woman even stops for a moment beside you, opens her mouth as if to speak. You hold your breath. She closes her mouth and shuffles toward the rear of the plane

You breathe again. You try to ignore the man seated next to you. You focus on the safety talk.

When the flight attendant buckles her fake belt, she glances at the cloud off her shoulder, then smiles apologetically at her audience. Like it’s her fault, or perhaps the airline’s? There’s nothing she can do, or anyone else.

You sniff. You smell damp fur. You frown, wondering, perhaps, how that could be? You don’t know what strange links lie between memory and nose, but we do.


Listen to this week’s Escape Pod!
Logged
adrianh
Hipparch
******
Posts: 736



WWW
« Reply #1 on: November 14, 2017, 10:49:17 AM »

No, your you're crying.

<sniff>

Good story. 12/10 Brent.
« Last Edit: November 16, 2017, 02:23:21 PM by adrianh » Logged
acpracht
EA Staff
*****
Posts: 183


« Reply #2 on: November 14, 2017, 09:11:52 PM »

No, your crying.

<sniff>

Good story. 12/10 Brent.

Take that feeling, weep, then realize it's your own speaking voice making you sob, laugh at yourself, then cry again. :/

That was my Thursday. Tongue

Jeremiah wrote a fantastic story here.

-Adam
Logged
irishlazz
Palmer
**
Posts: 23



« Reply #3 on: November 16, 2017, 01:59:50 PM »

This didn't have any affect on my tear ducts, but I did like the story quite a lot.
Logged

"We can't solve problems by using the same kind of thinking we used when we created them." A.Einstein
Jethro's belt
Palmer
**
Posts: 37



« Reply #4 on: November 20, 2017, 12:21:44 PM »

Multiple stories and mysteries here, glad I stayed past the early confusion and to be fair there was a steady stream of reveals. Ghost pack in the sky it was good.
Logged
DerangedMind
Peltast
***
Posts: 97


« Reply #5 on: Today at 08:34:45 AM »

I'm not quite sure what to say about this story...  I was engaged, it made me think, narration was great.  I started off confused as to what was going on, but the story was great with the reveals.

Did I love it?  No.  But I liked it a lot. 
Logged
Pages: [1]
  Print  
 
Jump to:  

Powered by MySQL Powered by PHP Powered by SMF 1.1.21 | SMF © 2015, Simple Machines Valid XHTML 1.0! Valid CSS!