Starr Striker was a far more interesting (very) short story of the two. It spoke to a contemporary issue with a fantastical flare. For me, it added enough detail to set the stage in my minds eye and brought me to a thoughtful state.
All the Fishes Singing didn't strike a chord for me. I must say that the descriptions and details were quite well done, but just didn't catch up with me. But, that's my problem, not the authors. My personal impression aside, I felt like the prose was an impressive construction.