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Author Topic: Too Many Ideas, but, one at a time perhaps?  (Read 11016 times)
Chivalrybean
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« Reply #20 on: July 18, 2008, 07:34:31 PM »

The overall comments on my Dragon story is people like it and want more of it, more details, more action, more more more. I take that as a compliment {:0)
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« Reply #21 on: July 29, 2008, 12:58:34 AM »

Dragon story DONE! Edited, I like the final rewrite. I addressed most or all of the major issues anyone pointed out that I felt needed changed, added more to the beginning and end, hopefully gave the characters more life, added more details to the action, and I am HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY with it.

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