All the feedback is much appreciated.
I need a condom, I think. I can't stop popping consonants, especially P's. I'll look into picking one up. The audio balance is still off and for the life of me I can't figure out how the hell to correct it. With the first episode, I realized the balance had been accidentally tweaked, which was easy to fix. But for some reason, the audio still favors the left speaker...
Also, I should apologize. For some reason, I completely screwed up the editing at the end. So I took it down, re-edited it, and posted it again (just now). It should be better now. I really don't know how I messed it up.
The next chapter will give you a lot more of annoying girl, and will give a bit of insight into what her purpose is. Hope you dig it and thanks for listening!