So, I'm a bit late with the feedback this week - I'm on holiday and my internet connection is spotty at best - but here goes:
I liked this story, but didn't love it. I liked the dual reading, and I liked the premise - that UFO "aliens" are really not aliens at all in any real sense, but deeply familiar, just a new form of the same creatures that have always lived at the edge of our existence - and that, indeed, living at the edge of our existence is their nature. And I liked the interplay between the two views on the same topic. But on the other hand, as some others in this forum occasionally bring up, it's best to show, not tell, and in this story, not only were we being continuously told stuff, we were continuously being told the same stuff twice. From two different perspectives, but still. I know this story was designed that way, and it worked, but it just wasn't entirely engaging.