Thanks to the terrible weather and traffic in Atlanta, I have now heard this story.
The reading was a bit uninspired -- technically capable, but I felt like she was phoning in some of the voices.
The story had a really great premise, but once again it fell a bit flat at the end. I was enjoying the beginning, and the journey, but then... to quote Eddie Izzard, "eeehhh..." She goes on this journey, doesn't meet her ancestor, doesn't interact with the potentially-interesting characters (the demon -- how did she know he was a demon? -- and the man in the fedora). The Chinese mythology aspect came into the story way too late (or the story would've had to be longer to support it) and if Rachel was going to interact with the Chinese heavens/hells then it should've started earlier. Since she didn't, I still think we could've gotten more out of that whole side of the story.
The other problem was the anachronisms. I know that Rachel's been dead for 70 years and has had time to learn about what's going on in the 90s-2000s, but she doesn't care about dopplering debit cards, doesn't understand airplanes/airports, but she thinks with the word "dopplering" as they drive away from the pedestrian that got clipped? That really took me out of the story and I just couldn't get back into it after that, unfortunately.
I did love the fact that Dr. Phil plays on the airport TVs in Heaven. That was funny. But again, if Rachel knows what cell phones are but not who Dr. Phil is, that bothers me.
Too much went wrong with this story for me to like it as much as I wanted to.