First of all, the writing in this piece was top shelf. The flow and feel of the narrative, and especially the dialogue, were great. I also loved the idea of summer camp for psycho-killer-cannibal kids.
On the other hand, character reactions just didn't seem to click. I really couldn't swallow that the protag would face his own torture and execution so calmly, even if he does, at some level, accept it as the norm for his particular slice of society. I can see people conditioned to accept murder and torture as normal, but can people, especially kids, be trained to accept their own torture and murder so dispassionately? I don't know. Maybe I'm just naive.
Still, I'd have to call that a minor quibble. Great story. This would make a really great screen play.
Great reading by George Hrab, but...Nigel was not your best voice. I kept seeing Bevis in my head every time he spoke. Other than that, a great delivery.
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