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Reply #25 on: May 27, 2009, 04:22:20 AM
... God, this makes me want to go get podcasting equipment and write a few intros myself.


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Reply #26 on: May 27, 2009, 05:48:39 AM
I loved it when Tempest did a fan intro of my first story on Podcastle.  It would be fun to do a fan intro of some other story on Podcastle provided the following was true:

1) I could find decent sound equipment so that I am not producing tinny, echoey, awful audio;

2) I'm introducing a story that I like;

3) Ann and Rachel are cool with the idea.

It strikes me that composing an artful intro is a bit like writing a drabble or a haiku -- you have to fit a lot of meaning into very few words, and what you leave out can be more important as what you put in.  I don't know if I could do it, but it would be fun to try sometime.

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Reply #27 on: May 27, 2009, 06:07:27 AM
I'm happy to give you a host spot, Hilary.

I have recommendations on cheapish ($40-$50) range audio equipment, but I know that not everyone has that to spare. (And sometimes even with good equipment, you sound awful; damn my vaulted ceilings. Oh well. We'll be moving again within a few months.) If you're willing to shell out, or alternately can find another way to record, I'm happy to give you a story, see if you like it, and try you out on a guest spot.

We should probably take this to email. ;)



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Reply #28 on: May 27, 2009, 07:52:42 AM
About intro:
The child voice wasn't so irritating to me. And I might event try those cookies. But how much is a stick of butter? (I know how much a cup is in real measures, a bit less than 2.5 dl, but a stick of butter?)

About the story itself. It was fairly good, but irritating in a way lot of fantasy really irritates me. I always hate when strange things happen without no explanation of HOW and/or WHY. I always suspect that even the author doesn't know answers tho those questions, and hasn't even bothered to think about those. That is probably one of reasons I like science fiction a lot more than fantasy.
 


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Reply #29 on: May 27, 2009, 12:22:39 PM
Oh, a stick of butter is a half cup.  Or a quarter pound, if you prefer.  Around here, butter comes in one pound boxes, with four sticks in each box, and when I read a recipe that says "one half cup of butter" I always translate that to "one stick."  I didn't stop to think about places where packaging would be different.  Sorry!



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Reply #30 on: May 27, 2009, 03:23:21 PM
So, just to get the basic stuff out of the way -

Intro - I enjoyed it. I'm fond of children narrators, and I am always happy to hear a cookie recipe. I was a bit puzzled by it, for the same reasons as Hilary, but I liked it nonetheless.

Story - Meh. I didn't find the story particular interesting, and while I have a positive attitude towards child narrators, it does not extend to adult narrators doing a "childish" voice. Especially since it was all wrong for the story - the viewpoint character was probably in her early-mid teens, given the spacing of the ages between her sibilings, and the voice sounded like it was pretending to be seven or eight. I may have enjoyed the story a lot more if it was read straight.

And on the bigger intro discussion -

Why insist on intros? It's clear from both Rachel's and Anne's posts on this thread that they would like to give more detailed discussions on the stories themes. And I, for one, would be very happy to hear what they have to say. I just want to hear it after I've heard the story, not before. Why not adopt the model that pseudopod, and later Steve-era Escape Pods, have taken, and do a short intro with just publication and author info, then the story, then an analytical outtro? Isn't that the best of all possible worlds, for everyone involved?



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Reply #31 on: May 27, 2009, 04:40:05 PM
I do like the idea of the analytical outro.  I love the research and thought that went into the Pahwahke intro, but would have loved it better after the story.

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Reply #32 on: May 28, 2009, 01:08:48 PM
In more exciting intro news -- my bid to get M. K. Hobson as our permanent host unfortunately failed ("It takes work to write those things!" she said to me. I responded, "Yes, I know..."), but she has agreed to introduce one episode a month. So, yay!

I'll do some for you if you like. :)

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Reply #33 on: May 28, 2009, 05:58:57 PM
This story really did nothing for me.  Way too obvious, never found myself caring for anyone or anything there.  Interesting themes waiting to be explored, but I don't really think justice was done to them.

As to the intro / outro debate - I agree that I'd love to hear any and all ruminations on the theme *after* the story.  Some amount is okay beforehand, just not so much as it's spoilers.  Beforehand I mostly want to hear about the author, maybe the genesis of the story, when and where it was first published.  Afterwards - go to down on the analysis!



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Reply #34 on: May 28, 2009, 06:21:52 PM
Interestingly, everyone we told before the podcast launched that the intro would be a cookie recipe was stoked -- which is also the reaction we got off the forums. Different strokes for different folks.

Or different stokes, anyway.  :D

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Reply #35 on: May 29, 2009, 01:57:03 PM
That's too bad, but Ann's my favorite anyway.

Aww, thanks.   :)

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Reply #36 on: May 29, 2009, 02:35:28 PM
i dislike that this will be a somewhat negative comment and for that i'm sorry.  but i need to say it and get it over with.

this is the episode that is making me unsubscribe to podcastle.

i made it through the intro, which i found really annoying.  i wont go off on a tangent, but i do not like children very much.  especially other people's (no i have none of my own, just cats & dogs).

the story, as presented, was spot on for a POV from a child as well as in the child's voice.  but all of that was annoying too.

lately PC episodes have been rubbish and if it was a short story collection i had bought, i wouldn't have finished it and simply loaned it out to a co-worker in the hopes of never seeing it again.

i truly love fantasy and had hoped this podcast would help me get through the ruts when i have nothing in my book rotation.

i'm sorry podcastle, we part ways today.



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Reply #37 on: May 29, 2009, 11:24:26 PM
i dislike that this will be a somewhat negative comment and for that i'm sorry.  but i need to say it and get it over with.

this is the episode that is making me unsubscribe to podcastle.

i made it through the intro, which i found really annoying.  i wont go off on a tangent, but i do not like children very much.  especially other people's (no i have none of my own, just cats & dogs).

the story, as presented, was spot on for a POV from a child as well as in the child's voice.  but all of that was annoying too.

lately PC episodes have been rubbish and if it was a short story collection i had bought, i wouldn't have finished it and simply loaned it out to a co-worker in the hopes of never seeing it again.

i truly love fantasy and had hoped this podcast would help me get through the ruts when i have nothing in my book rotation.

i'm sorry podcastle, we part ways today.

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No magazine works well for all readers.  There are a couple pro print magazines that I really don't read because I disagree with the editor's tastes.  So if Podcastle doesn't work for you, it doesn't.  This happens.

For me this magazine works.  I don't love every story that they've podcasted, but I have truly enjoyed most of them.  I like that Rachel and Ann are striving to include a wide range of fantasy.  I've seen recent stories as being far from rubbish, but hey... that just means that my tastes differ from yours. 

I'm sorry that you are leaving, and wish you luck in finding more fantasy stories that you enjoy.  I know that a number of authors have podcast their own stories and novels... so you should still be able to find fantasy audio out there if you look.

Take care,

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Reply #38 on: May 30, 2009, 05:36:22 PM
am working my way backwards through a huge backlog of podcasts and I have to say this one was a great story for someone who's been on a break from pods for a while. It was easy to listen to and it held my concentration throughout which is a huge accomplishment as I have a really hard time keeping my mind on one thing, anything, at the moment. especially when I am walking watching people and enjoying the sunshine while I am listening. So for all it's worth, this story was a perfect choice for audio fiction.

I really enjoyed the cookie intro and thought the child was/sounded incredibly cute. I will probably try that recipe one day but I can see commenters criticizing it for lack of connection with the actual story. Anyway, I thought it was very cute and well worth a listen nevertheless.



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Reply #39 on: May 31, 2009, 01:03:04 AM
I went to school with a woman who, whenever any story was read and it was her turn to critique, would say,"It was a good story, I liked it."

She was really perky and cute, and had a VERY strong southern accent ("I laaahked it," was how it came out).  And all her stories were full of strung out junkies and desperate murderers and they inevitably gobsmacked people the first time they read them because how did that come out of her smiling little head?

This story reminded me of her commentary.  It was a good story.  I liked it.  I see there was some critique of its lack of depth, and I'm usually the first to charge stories with being superficial, but I think this story's superficiality was deceptive.  No, it won't leave me thinking for days and no, I don't think I'll listen to it seven times in a row, the way I did Samantha Henderson's EP, or twice a month for several months, as I do with stories that really GET me, but I'm truly not seeing all the hate.

I liked the intro, too.  I don't have any problems with kids.  Or cookies.  I only wish that the story included mailing some of the described cookies to my house, because it's kind of mean to talk about fresh cookies without providing any but ehhh, not a perfect world, I guess. 

I don't really care whether the intros have anything to do with the stories or not.  Or whether they have kids in.  Do people not have fast forwarding on their mp3 players or their computers?  I'm never forced to listen to stuff I hate, though sometimes, I'll admit, it's a bit like a train wreck I can't stop watching.  But clearly the problem there is me, not the podcast, which I have the power to make go away. 

Intros with children followed by stories about children seems like a peculiar thing to abandon a podcast for, but if you're moved to it, you're moved to it and I'm no one to tell you otherwise. 

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Reply #40 on: June 11, 2009, 01:44:53 AM
I don't really understand why people have to announce that they're so bothered by free entertainment they'll be taking their ball and  going home.  This forum's for critiques of the story, that's all great, but cookies broke the camel's back?  Okay, I guess.

I liked this story a lot, and I never read it as what happened needing to be some kind of twist.  It was watching the mom enter the state of quasi-psychosis that was affecting for me, and the family dynamic that resulted.  The way families interact, fray, and reunite is really complex psychology, and this story pulled it off very well in my opinion.



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Reply #41 on: July 28, 2009, 06:52:36 AM
I liked it--for it's pretty predictable plot, the family situation was very relatable--the mom here kinda reminds me of my own; so if I don't comment any time soon, it's because I've been turned into a kitty.

One nitpick--I doubt there's any hippie enclaves in Arizona. Trust me, I live there, the enclaves we tend to get are either neo-nazis or the survivalists in the woods.
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Reply #42 on: December 15, 2009, 07:50:47 PM
I also didn't like the intro.  I like cookies, but they don't make a good intro for a story that has no cookies in it.  Maybe it would've worked well for "Through the Cooking Glass"--except that was a short with no intro, I guess.

On the subject of intros and outros, HMM summed up my feelings pretty well.  I like an intro to be relevant to the story but in a tangential way, plus the plugs for the author's other work and where this story has been published before, that sort of thing.  And then the outro can point out all kinds of spoiler-stuff and analyze to the heart's content!

This story was all right, though it was a little unclear why the kids didn't disappear right away, instead of all disappearing simultaneously when the parrot showed up.  There didn't seem to be any internal logic for that.

It was a fun idea, and I enjoyed the writing, but the resolution of having the neighbor come over and chat didn't really seem any different than just the kids talking to her...  I mean, when the narrator pointed out flaws in Mom's reasoning, she just went blank and didn't respond, so why didn't Mom do the same when the neighbor told her?

And, despite the title and the father's insistence that her behavior was due to her "change of life", I thought it was clear in the story that this wasn't just menopause that was occurring.  Roughly translated, his explanation comes out to "I have no idea why she's acting that way.  I don't understand, so I guess it must be "a woman thing".  And she's about the right age for menopause, so I guess that must be it!"  "Mystery solved!" he says, and washes his hands of it.



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Reply #43 on: November 05, 2010, 10:11:37 PM
So they all reappeared, and everyone's happy, right?  What about the military?  That one son's disappearance caused him to be AWOL.



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Reply #44 on: November 09, 2010, 04:09:42 PM
One nitpick--I doubt there's any hippie enclaves in Arizona. Trust me, I live there, the enclaves we tend to get are either neo-nazis or the survivalists in the woods.

I lived there too.  And yes there are hippie enclaves. If you don't believe me, drive south I-10 from Phoenix to Tucson until you see a sign for Arcosanti.  It was a project started in the 70's by Paolo Soleri (student of the great Frank Lloyd Wright) to build the first ever Arcology.  It's pretty much entirely made of hippies now.  There's also a bunch up near Sedona and Flag.



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Reply #45 on: February 23, 2012, 03:35:33 AM
One nitpick--I doubt there's any hippie enclaves in Arizona. Trust me, I live there, the enclaves we tend to get are either neo-nazis or the survivalists in the woods.

I lived there too.  And yes there are hippie enclaves. If you don't believe me, drive south I-10 from Phoenix to Tucson until you see a sign for Arcosanti.  It was a project started in the 70's by Paolo Soleri (student of the great Frank Lloyd Wright) to build the first ever Arcology.  It's pretty much entirely made of hippies now.  There's also a bunch up near Sedona and Flag.

I expect they have even more hippies now with the burn culture dragging more folks out to the desert every year. Someone's VW minibus is bound to break down on the way back and they root where they stop. Gotta watch out for those hippy infestations. Once they get established spraying and baited traps lose a lot of effectiveness.

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