This one had some interesting ideas, but in the end it fell flat. It was kind of the tale of a person who is anarchist with OCD and paranoid tendencies. I thought it was interesting how the seemingly random early steps tied into the later steps. I especially liked the first step where you listen to the WB cartoons to find all the city names.
But the things I didn't like:
1. It went on too long. When each of the steps is essentially meaningless, it just got a little dull by the end. It was fun in the beginning when the steps were so weird and unheard of, and fun in the middle when I realized the early steps tied into the later steps, but in the last part, it was just more of the same.
2. It claims to be a To Do list, and is structured mostly as if it were so. It's apparently not even a to-do list for a specific person, since one step hinges on the sex of the reader. but then there are other things which are clearly NOT fitting in a to-do list such as "you know an old woman you see when you run errands". No I don't, and how would an apparently random recipient of this note get this. And then later it refers that the old woman has died, and that there will be pictures of fireballs on the news. At that point the story is telling what is happening around the reader, and so the story was trying to break out of its own To Do list structure and weakened its own foundation. If you're going to write a story structured as a To Do list, then if you don't stick to it throughout the whole thing falls apart.