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Author Topic: PC065: Foam On The Water  (Read 5470 times)
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« Reply #20 on: December 23, 2009, 09:01:13 AM »

While I though the sado-masochism was an interesting element, and the fact that he is so ashamed/afraid of his own desires that he refuses to let anyone close made for an interesting character, the mermaid seemed more like a sidenote, an unimportant part of the set dressing.

And I really really disliked the ending.  It seems like he might open up to her and then she dissolves in the water, and his reaction is "Phew, that's a relief!" 
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