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on: September 17, 2009, 04:07:00 AM
Flash: Your Shoes

By Bev Vincent

Read by Ben Phillips

Music by Randy Garcia

My chest is heavy, hair brushes against my neck in an unfamiliar way, and my groin… Through the unaccustomed daze, a terrible comprehension floods my mind. I throw back the sheet to reveal a body I'm used to looking at from a different perspective.



Listen to this Pseudopod Flash.

I'd like to hear my options, so I could weigh them, what do you say?
Five pounds?  Six pounds? Seven pounds?


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Reply #1 on: September 17, 2009, 03:05:04 PM
Outstanding flash!  Not much else to say, but this piece deserves praise.  I don't have to worry about it finding out how I felt about it!



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Reply #2 on: September 17, 2009, 11:19:06 PM
Great concept, great execution.  I've definitely pondered this concept, although more in a Ranma 1/2 kind of way, and without the wrinkle of someone else taking my body in turn.  Excellent flash!