This one was... interesting. It definitely evoked strange and unique images.
I had a major disconnect when he started to describe his lopsided chest. Before that he had described it as a superfluous third nipple, which just kind of look like little blemishes. It's a big jump from a little blemish to a milk-swollen breast with working nipple. Maybe I missed it, but I didn't see any connecting transition there, and that made it hard to picture what was going on.
And my biggest dislike, although it had interesting images, with some enjoyable humor, I wouldn't really call this a story. There were no obstacles to the protagonist's goals, although perhaps that's because he didn't really have any particular goals. Where's the conflict? Yes, he had some apprehension about the weirdness at first, but that passed pretty quickly and soon he's taking in followers like there's no tomorrow. A character traveling from point A to point B with no obstacles, even if point B is extremely weird, does not really engage my interest to any great degree. I did finish listening to it to see where it ended up going, but I would have been much more interested if there had been some conflict.