This is probably the weakest Richard Parks story PC has run, mostly because his other ones were really, really good. I was wondering what the conflict in the story was going to be and I was kind of disappointed; it felt tacked-on, as if the author had come up with this really cool take on the necropolis concept and needed some way to put conflict or tension in it to make it more likely to sell. (I totally understand having to do that, BTW...) I liked the mythology, too -- dreamer vs nightmares, not necessarily a new take but still a good one, and the discussion between the MC and the Demon was nice. The "Demon isn't really evil" concept again isn't new but was done well.
Mostly what made this story weak for me was the conflict itself, and then the resolution didn't really do it for me either -- his punishment is to tell his story forever? Really? If I was him, I'd have been pretty pissed off, especially after the Demon said "won't things be better for the Dreamer if the pain of your parents is eliminated?"
So, y'know, great ideas but I didn't love it.
The usual great reading from W.F.