Author Topic: PC071: I'll Give In  (Read 12036 times)


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Reply #25 on: November 06, 2009, 05:23:15 PM
One more thing I remembered I wanted to add:

The only real tension in the story was whether she would end up hooking up with the bull-man.  Except that the result of that decision was resolved already by the title "I Will Give In".  I knew the answer to that tension question before it was even asked, so there was no potential for tension.