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Author Topic: PC184: Black Swan, White Swan  (Read 11181 times)

LaShawn

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Reply #25 on: February 06, 2012, 04:12:00 PM
This was a pretty story, but I was confused by the swan element. Like Listener, I thought that Shea was the white swan (not Ben, though) and Adele/Delia was the black swan. I thought that right up to the very end, when the two swans fly off and I thought, awww...well, at least they're together. Then it showed Shea on the ground and I thought, wait, what?

I guess I need to read this one to catch the nuances. I also wished to listen to the piano pieces, since the only one I recognized was Ave Maria.

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