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Reply #150 on: March 12, 2011, 11:51:34 PM
I'm waiting for stEPH to come back and finish off Set Down This.


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Reply #151 on: March 13, 2011, 06:50:54 AM
[-1] The Dreaming Way
[+1] Papa Was a Gypsy

in the StePH tradition of singlemindedly going for your goal.



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Reply #152 on: March 13, 2011, 08:02:34 AM
-1 The nimble men
+1 her collection of intimacy



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Reply #153 on: March 13, 2011, 02:51:17 PM
I'm waiting for stEPH to come back and finish off Set Down This.

What part of "rage quit" did you not get?

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Reply #154 on: March 13, 2011, 03:17:53 PM
the time has come for set down this, the point goes to oil of dog.

our list has become pretty small, everyone that wants to could start tracking their own changes.  just include any untracked changes since the last time the list was posted.

[11] Acceptable Losses (191)
+1[11] Oil of Dog (200)
+1[10] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
-1[10] The Nimble Men (210)
-1[ 6] The Dreaming Way (182)
+1[ 5] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)
-2[ 1] Set Down This (197)
« Last Edit: March 13, 2011, 10:57:48 PM by deflective »



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Reply #155 on: March 13, 2011, 09:04:41 PM
[11] Acceptable Losses (191)
[11] Oil of Dog (200)
+1 [11] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
[10] The Nimble Men (210)
-1[ 5] The Dreaming Way (182)
[ 5] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)
[ 1] Set Down This (197)

Evening up the bottom and the top.  I'll be glad to see Dreaming Way and Her Collection of Intimacy gone, but then the top 4 are awfully hard for me.  This will require serious thought for tomorrow.



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Reply #156 on: March 14, 2011, 02:02:00 AM
Since I'm not gonna just reverse your play

[11] Acceptable Losses (191)
[11] Oil of Dog (200)
[11] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
[10] The Nimble Men (210)
+1[ 6]The Dreaming Way (182)
[ 5] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)

-1[ 0] Set Down This (197) for stePH
« Last Edit: March 14, 2011, 02:04:13 AM by Fenrix »

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Reply #157 on: March 14, 2011, 03:47:53 AM
-1[ 0] Set Down This (197) for stePH


Don't bother, m8... it's already outlived far worthier stories for too long.

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Reply #158 on: March 14, 2011, 07:53:57 AM

[11] Oil of Dog (200)
[11] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
-1 [10] Acceptable Losses (191)
[10] The Nimble Men (210)
[ 6]The Dreaming Way (182)
+1[ 6] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)



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Reply #159 on: March 14, 2011, 10:49:05 AM
Hmm.... At the moment, there's one story in the top four I haven't heard (papa was a gypsy). I should probably find time to listen to it soon or I'll have to stop participating.



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Reply #160 on: March 14, 2011, 03:28:04 PM
[11] Oil of Dog (200)
-1 [10] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
[10] Acceptable Losses (191)
[10] The Nimble Men (210)
+1 [ 7]The Dreaming Way (182)
[ 6] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)

I should probably give Her Collection of Intimacy a listen. I haven't made any plays for or against stories I haven't listened to, but since we're down to the last six...

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Reply #161 on: March 14, 2011, 03:38:57 PM
both set down this and is this a horror story? have been eliminated now.  these are another two stories that i wish came head-to-head at some point.  they had a lot of similarities, both works were almost plotless and focused on exposing the reader to the reality of horror instead of creating something new.  is this a horror story? was a lot shorter tho.

[11] Oil of Dog (200)
+1[11] The Nimble Men (210)
[10] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
[10] Acceptable Losses (191)
-2[ 5]The Dreaming Way (182)
-1[ 5] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)



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Reply #162 on: March 14, 2011, 05:15:43 PM
[11] Oil of Dog (200)
-1[10] The Nimble Men (210)
[10] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
[10] Acceptable Losses (191)
+1[ 6]The Dreaming Way (182)
[ 5] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)

I love Jim Biyeh's stuff.  The Nimble Men was good, but there wasn't really much to the story, I felt... two guys step out of their plane, stand around, and freak out.
« Last Edit: March 14, 2011, 05:19:15 PM by Bdoomed »

I'd like to hear my options, so I could weigh them, what do you say?
Five pounds?  Six pounds? Seven pounds?


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Reply #163 on: March 14, 2011, 05:17:32 PM
Okay crap what's the actual score now?  There are three different numbers :P

I'd like to hear my options, so I could weigh them, what do you say?
Five pounds?  Six pounds? Seven pounds?


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Reply #164 on: March 14, 2011, 05:18:50 PM
Follow the score from the post above yours; it's the final one (Deflective's one also includes the daily -1 to the lowest scorers).

Also, you voted -1 for acceptable losses but your post was about the nimble men. Which one did you mean?



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Reply #165 on: March 14, 2011, 05:20:06 PM
Yeah I saw that.  Fix'd.  When I first copied a list, Nimble Men was where Acceptable Losses was.  So when I changed it, I put the -1 in the same place :P

I'd like to hear my options, so I could weigh them, what do you say?
Five pounds?  Six pounds? Seven pounds?


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Reply #166 on: March 14, 2011, 10:58:25 PM
[+1] The Nimble Men
[-1] Her Collection of Intimacy

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Reply #167 on: March 15, 2011, 02:44:06 AM
[-1] The Dreaming Way
[+1] Oil of Dog

Voting for my favorite now, because it deserves to be in the lead.



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Reply #168 on: March 15, 2011, 03:48:23 AM
+1 [12] The Nimble Men (210)
-1 [11] Oil of Dog (200)
[10] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
[10] Acceptable Losses (191)
[ 5]The Dreaming Way (182)
[ 4] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)




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Reply #169 on: March 15, 2011, 08:00:13 AM
[12] The Nimble Men (210)
[11] Oil of Dog (200)
[10] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
-1[9] Acceptable Losses (191)
[ 5]The Dreaming Way (182)
+1 [ 5] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)



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Reply #170 on: March 15, 2011, 12:41:29 PM
[12] The Nimble Men (210)
[11] Oil of Dog (200)
-1 [9] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
[9] Acceptable Losses (191)
+1 [ 6]The Dreaming Way (182)
[ 5] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)

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Reply #171 on: March 15, 2011, 05:24:31 PM
[12] The Nimble Men (210)
[11] Oil of Dog (200)
+1[10] Acceptable Losses (191)
[ 9] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
-2[ 4]The Dreaming Way (182)
-1[ 4] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)



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Reply #172 on: March 16, 2011, 02:47:47 AM
[12] The Nimble Men (210)
[11] Oil of Dog (200)
[10] Acceptable Losses (191)
+1 [10] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
-1 [3]The Dreaming Way (182)
[ 4] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)



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Reply #173 on: March 16, 2011, 07:36:18 AM
[12] The Nimble Men (210)
[11] Oil of Dog (200)
[10] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
-1 [9] Acceptable Losses (191)
+1 [5] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)
[3]The Dreaming Way (182)



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Reply #174 on: March 16, 2011, 02:47:14 PM
her collection of intimacy loses one to the dreaming way

[12] The Nimble Men (210)
[11] Oil of Dog (200)
[10] Papa Was a Gypsy (207)
[ 9] Acceptable Losses (191)
-2[ 3] Her Collection of Intimacy (204)
[ 3] The Dreaming Way (182)