I know that we are only supposed to be gushing praise, but...
Unblinking summed it up well. I didn't care about the question "where is that character born"? I agree, most of the Bordertown stories are poor. If a writer doesn't have enough to develop their own story, giving them a poorly constructed world isn't going to help, except to get published on a site that has a sad penchant for the boring Bordertown.
It would help to learn to observe the world. Stilt walkers don't bounce, they glide -stop, glide - stop. Learn to really look at a stilt walker before you are going to slow down your story to describe one, and you will learn to more fully observe people. Or was that just to describer a character's breasts? We don't really care what a character looks like, we want to know how the character feels.
There were a lot of unimportant ideas just thrown in an not developed. Example "The mad hunt" that hunts for the doomed in broad day light. Okay, build a story around that and make us care about a character who is being hunted, or develop the idea, but just putting it and then going on to the next partly developed idea is a waste of time.
danooli is right. the reading was too fast. Also, the narration was poor. We have all heard Jamaican accents, but we have also heard them with clear enunciation. Read more slowly and focus on giving the ending consonants their full stop. Ending vowels can be linked, do not clip off an ending consonant to link a previous vowel.
Altogether, not a strong study of people, or any interesting or thought provoking ideas. Was the incest supposed to be so "crazy" we would overlook the lack of plot? Being non hetero, non European does not make it automatically non boring, but they might be crutches to deflect constructive criticism. Being counter culture gives you a ready made audience. Break out of that rut to let your voice run free. Stop trying to impress people with how different you are. First, not different, second, being weird is not different, third, you have have to be different to be better, but being different doesn't make you better, and being different for the sake of being different will prevent you from being better.
Since escape artists started paying per word, it seems the stories have started to get longer and in large part, of lower quality.