This must go into the bag of well/decently written, well narrated pieces I just don't like. I'm a huge fan of puns, I find it be a great humor style which is especially difficult to do over a long period of time, you have to be very good at matching synonyms and word play!
I think that this story was meant to be dark humor, of the revenge variety, but I've pretty much never liked those kinds of stories, and taking it to a next level with god-powers acting like anonymous web posters with weapons of mass of destruction, I don't find it humorous, pretty much at all. That makes the story very hard to get into and/or enjoy. A god doesn't to be wonderful, or fix problems, they can be mean, nasty or capricious, and they often are. Looking through most pantheons you see fine examples, and in "American Gods" plenty of them are hardly what one might call "good." But the story also isn't ONLY about them, in this case we only see Trixie, raised by the whatever committee that apparently says, "You, you there, be a god!" I assume these gods are picked by facebook popularity contests, which is the perfect way to pick everything!
There are a lot of comments about morals vs a story for amusement, one big issue I see with this story is that if, like myself, you don't find her actions darkly humorous, or don't understand half of what they say in the club, its hard to move past actions that just feel reprehensible, in god and human alike. I've often pondered what it means when we try and judge the actions of gods, but often times I end up stalling in that we sort of have to judge them by what we have, when you have a pantheon you have to judge them on what they say and do, and how you feel. Perhaps there is more reason than internet-rage behind her actions...but from this tid-bit sure doesn't feel like it.
I closing, while I didn't really like this one, I would gladly listen to others written by the same author, its well written and I totally see why it was picked for publication.