Author Topic: PC365: The Newsboy's Last Stand  (Read 6340 times)


  • Hipparch
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Reply #25 on: June 21, 2015, 12:29:46 AM
You guys, you're making me so hungry! :D

I loved this story, loved the intro/outro, loved, the narration... Basically, it was hearts all the way down. So, when is this International Jelly Day taking place? Because I'm totally in!


  • Matross
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Reply #26 on: June 29, 2015, 02:57:46 AM
Delightful story! Delicious discussion! Delovely narration!


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Reply #27 on: August 26, 2015, 10:59:41 AM

I liked this story (which is saying a lot, because most of the humorous stories here don't hit my strange sense of humor.), but I thought that the pop-culture references in the beginning did nothing but damage the author's originality. 

It gave me the feeling (and this is strictly an opinion) that she wasn't confident enough to stand completely on her own wit, but that was something that she did not need to be worried about.