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Pseudopod 442: The Only Child
« on: June 13, 2015, 09:11:47 PM »
Pseudopod 442: The Only Child

by Leslie J. Anderson

“The Only Child” is a PseudoPod original. “While writing this story I was wondering why death sometimes makes people feel special – touching it, escaping it, even causing it. Yet it’s not special. It’s something that happens to all of us eventually and it’s usually terrible.”

Leslie J. Anderson was born and raised in Michigan and now lives in Ohio with her husband and a puppy named Caper. For her day job she organizes words for a bank. Her writing has appeared in Asimov’s, Andromeda Spaceways Inflight Magazine, Strange Horizons, and Daily Science Fiction. Her poetry has been nominated for a Pushcart and a Rhysling Award. She has a book of science fiction prompts, (called 100 Prompts For Science Fiction Writers) from Sterling Publishing. Her speculative poetry book, An Inheritance of Stone, was released from Alliteration Ink last year, and her urban fantasy novel, The Cricket Prophecies, was released in May by Post Mortem Press. For more information you can visit her website: lesliejanderson.com.

Your reader this week is Emily Smith. This is Emily’s third narration for Pseudopod. She is a part-time physician and full time mom in central California. While not narrating for Pseudopod or saving lives, she lives in constant danger of being eaten by cats, tripped by a baby, choked by a wisteria vine or smothered by wild birds. The wisteria vine is currently the most likely cause of her demise as it is the only thing not dependent on her for sustenance and her death dovetails nicely into its plan for world domination.




“Annabell Crowley lay on the dirt floor and looked up at Death. She remembered that a man had cut her throat. It was so hard to hold onto ideas. Her parents were already dead. Death had taken their spirits hours ago. She thought she should be afraid of him, but wasn’t. The human mind has amazing capabilities of adjusting to a new reality. The world was very peaceful. She looked up at Death, who looked back down at her. How funny that everything felt normal now. A man had cut her throat and she was not dead, even though that was impossible. Her arms lay at her sides. She didn’t have the power to raise them.

Death tilted his head. His skin was pulled close over his skull and his eyes were closed and sunken. Maybe he had no eyes at all. After looking at her for a long time he flicked the cigarette away and walked out the door. He was dressed in flannel and jean, with a brown hat. He had taken the hat from a hanged man because he’d liked it and it fit well. He stepped over Anna’s father.”



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Re: Pseudopod 442: The Only Child
« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2015, 10:46:59 AM »
Excellent story and perfect narration.  Well done!

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Re: Pseudopod 442: The Only Child
« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2015, 08:57:37 AM »
I enjoyed it.  I admit i am a sucker for Death as a character, especially when he is sympathetic in at least some fashion--just a guy doing a job.  The interaction between the two was somehow both sweet and horrible, in that he obviously had affection for her, but would not release her no matter how she begged.  The first time he couldn't release her because it wasn't her time (somehow) but it seemed like after that it was really just his choice, and he was denying her the end that all living things go to, which seemed like it might be an act of selfish affection.

I didn't really understand how it wasn't her time... her throat was cut, hard to mistake that as a real ending.  Did I miss some detail there?  Or was it a "just because"? 

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Re: Pseudopod 442: The Only Child
« Reply #3 on: June 30, 2015, 03:35:36 PM »
I also really enjoyed this story, but was confused as well to how she would survive her throat having been cut. It was intresting that in the end it seemed that her own family had secrets.
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Re: Pseudopod 442: The Only Child
« Reply #4 on: August 03, 2015, 01:05:49 PM »
I don't have too much to say about this one.  I certainly enjoyed it, although it took a little while for me to become immersed.  The subject matter was fairly well-worn, but it was a solid take on it.
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