I liked the world building and the set up, but was frustrated by the initial setup of the story. She doesn't seem to have been at all prepared for this, where did their protector go? I was engaged by the battle and the conclusion though. So I guess it was a mixed bag for me.
Quote from: Devoted135 on January 26, 2017, 08:11:17 PMI liked the world building and the set up, but was frustrated by the initial setup of the story. She doesn't seem to have been at all prepared for this, where did their protector go? I was engaged by the battle and the conclusion though. So I guess it was a mixed bag for me. Devoted's finally getting caught up... Hehe.