Great story. Well narrwted.... question about the last part....
...um, was the narrator quoting a Joy Division song, or did either Jack or Grayson pull a knife on the other? The prose got too purple for me! Pity.
Who knows why the love interest had scars all over the body. I like it.
Great story. Well narrwted.... question about the last part....
...um, was the narrator quoting a Joy Division song, or did either Jack or Grayson pull a knife on the other? The prose got too purple for me! Pity.
Who knows why the love interest had scars all over the body. I like it.
The text is all here and helps answer your question: http://pseudopod.org/2018/02/09/pseudopod-581-love-will-tear-us-apart/
Also the video for every section title is linked in the story, for your viewing pleasure.
Re: Section 10. Shoot Out The Lights.
So...
as far as I can see, it's NOT part of the Joy Division Song. If he attacks and devours another human, he'll experience his lover's tears... the two men will embrace. And as his lover will execute him with a switchblade...
...sigh, if it's meant to be vague that's fair enough. It's romantic fiction, not an IKEA manual! :)