Interested forumites can read along here (http://forum.escapeartists.net/index.php?topic=3689.0) :) (It was a semi-finalist in our flash fiction contest.)
It's an interesting idea, but to me it never develops enough to be interesting.
It's an interesting idea, but to me it never develops enough to be interesting.(http://sunshineofthesoul.com/images/_Yin_Yang.jpg)
It's an interesting idea, but to me it never develops enough to be interesting.(http://sunshineofthesoul.com/images/_Yin_Yang.jpg)
Huh?
I think Wilson is amused (as am I) that you called it an interesting idea, but then said it never develops enough to be interesting.
Zen, dude. Very zen. Now go make yourself a White Russian. :)