This was horrible!! Well written, but, wow, what a horrible society.
And I agree with what Ichneumon said; this story didn't offer me any hope. In fact it made me wonder why anyone would have a child in this society at all (and I'm not one of those people who thinks that about our current society, so that is a big statement for me). Or why anyone would even stay alive in it, for that matter. I actually felt relief for the MC at the end because she gets to leave.
This story was just far too bleak for me. Clearly the writing was good, to elicit such a strong reaction in me. But please don't do that again....