This was a great story. The POV, the language and structure used, and the narrative structure all intrigued me.
I am in IT and listened at work while troubleshooting data issues; the technology related phrases made me smile throughout.
I have to say that I am excited for a world to exist where defragging is as outdated as blowing in a Nintendo cartridge. I love robust software solutions, and I loved this story.
Thanks for sharing it.
-eric