Hmm... (by the way, I am making a thinking noise, not addressing Hillary Moon Murphy)
This was okay, but probably my least favorite of Mur's stories that I've heard. The concept itself was pretty cool, but the story itself just didn't do it for me.
I agree with others about the use of Katrina being a bad choice. Apparently if the residents of New Orleans would just be happier, then the hurricane would not have flooded the town.
The idea of Citytalkers was cool, but it wasn't at all clear to me why we want the cities to heal. The healing process itself often kills lots of people. It's said directly in the stories that what is good for the city is not always good for the citizens. So, why encourage the healing?
The stormtalking felt kind of tacked on, to help Gloria escape the corner she'd been written into with the shooting. For one thing, it sounded like Charlotte chose her specifically because she was a stormtalker. So, what was the point of the gun? And even if Charlotte can cause her citizens to do certain things, it seemed rather out of the blue for an unknown person to offer her a gun. Perhaps not far-fetched for her to acquire a gun, but would think that the people themselves would have to do the micromanagement.
And I agree with others that the shadow organization was totally unnecessary.
And in the end, I just didn't really care that much about either of the main characters. Mostly because I didn't see the city-healing as a positive thing.