I loved this story!
Narrator's voice (Dominick Rabrun) fit very well with the main character.
The story (and presentation) were nice and gritty, in the way that perfectly fits a bio/diesel-punk fiction. The bits and bobs of invented slang make the world feel alive and lived in, and the wash of proper nouns are all descriptive enough in their own sense or context that they add to the immersion, rather than distance the reader from the world as can be the case with less well-written works.
I listened to the audio version myself, and am going to give it a read-over as well to catch some of the spelling wordplay, like this one I just caught in the abstract, but did not notice as much while listening: "and it clearly guzzled rich diez".
I would love to see more of this!
- Bjerg