Butterfly - Good use of a time travel story to explore concepts related to a deep, personal moral quandary. Nice.
In Roaring She Shall Rise - Not sure what actually happens here. Slice of life for octopuses who have taken over submerged cities?
Death Poems of the Folded Ones - I don't get this one. I don't understand how the folded ones actually speak by folding. And I don't understand what the child adds here. Sure, they supply an idea for interpretation, but without any rationale or anything to back up this idea, that's all it is. What am I not getting here? Is this just a story about family, and the mother/son relationship is the main point, with the folding aliens just a backdrop? Either way, this did not work for me.
The Day the Sun Went Out - This one is downright depressing. I'm not sure if the family is now going to have to abandon their habitat and go back to Earth, or just wait to die. From the mother's depression, it sounds like die is the only option. Again, downright depressing.... Clearly it's a good story, since it seems to have affected me so strongly. But I do not like it.