I liked how the MC ignored other people’s advice and bought the door. I felt that she was somehow attracted to its evil. You know, there’s a quote from a Brazilian author: “Sin attracts me, what is forbidden fascinates me.” That’s not only her, that’s human nature.
Fun fact: I only realized that the story was a throwback when I finished it. I thought the language used was meant to set the scenario for the reader, but the author was writing in her current language. All in all, it worked just fine
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There are a lot of missing commas and quotation marks in this one. Was it on purpose?
I wished more tension in the scenes that feature the door, particularly when a major character dies. Also, MC was very indifferent to the death of said character.