Author Topic: PC006: Hotel Astarte  (Read 39562 times)

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Reply #50 on: January 08, 2010, 07:24:51 PM
This one didn't keep my interest.  The beginning was far too slow, without anything of real interest happening.  The only real hook at the beginning is the mix of mythology and the midwest, but the midwest didn't feel like the midwest, so it just ended up being a random place called the midwest for no apparent reason.  To me it read like someone trying to describe the midwest who'd never been there.