Author Topic: PC004: Goosegirl  (Read 38221 times)


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Reply #50 on: June 20, 2008, 12:35:03 PM
Liked it. I thought the lack of exposition fitted the main characters dilemma. Nice resolution and I can see why the swine herd would want to be just that.

A winner and one I will keep to relisten to.


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Reply #51 on: November 13, 2009, 06:34:18 PM
Not a bad story, and I realize it was intended to be confusing, but it was too successful on that count.  I just kept on being confused.  Especially about the king/prince thing.  Were they the same person merged like the witch/princess?

I do like unreliable narrator stories, and I liked the way the fragmented personalities made two completely different characters than the story started with.