The Word Whore, as always, put on a great show. She's probably my favorite my favorite female Pseudopod narrator, though Mur is neck and neck with her.
The sound effects didn't work really well for me. At the beginning they were too subtle, and I thought that the narrator just happened to have background noise until I realized it coincided with the story actions. Then I didn't mind it, but then at the loud it was so overblown as to verge on the ridiculous. At that point it was sort of like a laugh line on an old sitcom--telling me when I ought to be laughing, or when I ought to be tense.
The story itself was reasonably good, though I did have a little trouble following her reasoning "You're going to leave me, therefore I shall kill you." I realize she was intended to be irrational, but I find it a little hard to immerse in her mind because of it.