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  • Voting has started for the Podcastle Flash Fiction contest. Anyone who has made at least one post should be able to see the stories down in the Arcade.

    New groups are posted every two days through the end of April.

News

Voting has started for the Podcastle Flash Fiction contest. Anyone who has made at least one post should be able to see the stories down in the Arcade.

New groups are posted every two days through the end of April.

Author Topic: PC071: I'll Give In  (Read 12355 times)

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Reply #25 on: November 06, 2009, 05:23:15 PM
One more thing I remembered I wanted to add:

The only real tension in the story was whether she would end up hooking up with the bull-man.  Except that the result of that decision was resolved already by the title "I Will Give In".  I knew the answer to that tension question before it was even asked, so there was no potential for tension.