it's odd to hear this one after love like thunder. was that the author's intention or just the way that pseudopod ran them?
I think the order is very intentional. This story seems meant to fill in the gaps from "Love Like Thunder."
Unfortunately, for me at least, it was completely unnecessary. I already read this story; it was completely implied within "Love Like Thunder," and I was actually really disappointed when I realized what it was. No surprises. No twists. Nothing unexpected. Nothing we hadn't already been given ample clues to figure out. Nearly the only thing that wasn't directly stated in "Love Like Thunder" was the breed of the dog. I actually really, deeply enjoyed the 'extra' story in "Love Like Thunder," being able to see the shape of the misguided girl's seduction and corruption in the unspoken parts of that story's narrative. Having it filled in explicitly is a bit... well, honestly, it feels like the Star Wars prequels. I'm sorry, but this was Episode I to me. (My apologies, Jim. That was kind of mean. I may have overstated my case. It's definitely not Episode II, if that makes you feel any better.)
On the whole, however, I am all in favor of Jim Bihyeh and welcome him and his Coyote Tales as Pseudopod's answer to the Union Dues. I am just inordinately fond of hints and implication, and disproportionately displeased by unambiguous narrative.