Marvelous follow up. This time period is such a great setting, but it seems to me that writers often fall into an archaic voice when trying to write about it. Not so much in the dialogue, which makes sense, but in the narration. What Burke does here is much more modern, and to my ear, has a much more natural feel. The formality of writing from this period can make it hard for a writer to make an emotional connection with an audience. Kudos to Mr. Burke for sidestepping that business entirely.
What a delightfully creepy scenario. I tried to imagine what it must be like to be trapped in the mind of a grave worm, with the drives of a grave worm. In your dear mother's casket. Guh.
Also, great reading by Paul S. Jenkins, as usual. That calm, heavy delivery works perfectly for Alexandre, but he switched gears easily for the flighty Aunt and the unsteady agent. Nicely done.
