I really enjoyed these characters. They were well played by the dialog. It reminds me of the "Special Forces/Ghost Brigades" units in
Old Man's War by John Scalzi (TOR, 2004)--genetically grown super soldiers born adult size with all the military knowledge they require to, well, soldier at ages ranging from 3-15. Scalzi sets up these child-soldiers as born with the full knowledge of adults, but with the emotional ages of children. The character plot is very similar to our story. The charactes reminds me of the book Microserfs by Douglas Coupland (HarperCollins, 1995). The childish, outlandish, and youthful vagrancies of over paid and over worked tech workers in the Dot-Com-Boom-Days--adulthood postponed.
There was little room in "Start the Clock" to philosophise on dealing with child-adults, or what it means. That's left to us to discover for our selves. Instead the conflict of one character leaving the fold is emotionally gripping in its simplicity. Well done.
Thanks, I'm enjoying the stories and look forward to the futureā¦ ehehe.
Xtian
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