Author Topic: My writing/reading sample  (Read 2818 times)


  • Palmer
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on: April 18, 2007, 05:08:24 PM
This is the first chapter of my novel "Metalface: Redemption" read by me. I'm not great at either task, so feedback is requested.
Thanks for letting me share.

PS. The Metalface series has been published even since 1998 in short stories and role playing games. I am aware of the first publication issue. Thank you for looking out for struggling authors.

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