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PodCastle 286: The Calendar of Saints

by Kat Howard

Read by Amal El-Mohtar

Originally published in Beneath Ceaseless Skies. Read it here!

The first time I used a blade to defend a point of honor, both the blade and the honor were mine. I was perhaps eight, and Rosamaria Sandro had accused me of copying her mathematics exam. The next time we were in the salle, I told her I would prove her a liar with my blade. She stopped laughing at the idea when I hit her for the third time with the blunted end of my sword and made her tell our mathematics instructor the truth. The pomp and ceremony of today’s events have nothing in common with that juvenile scuffle but the blade.

The blade, of course, is what matters. It is as sharp, as edged, as fatal as truth.

The subject of this Arbitration stands to the left of the dueling grounds, tiny white teeth sunk so deep into her lip that it, too, whitens. Her fiancé hovers close by, as if to shield her from the events or perhaps from their consequences. I wonder if he will put her aside if I am defeated. I want to think that he will stay with her, that his protective posture is a sign of genuine attachment rather than a signal of possession. Laurelle is beautiful, and wealthy. The things that have been whispered about her would never have been said so viciously if it were otherwise. So it is possible he stands at her back because of reasons other than love, but I do not wish to believe in them.


Rated R. Contains swords, which are sharp, edged, and fatal.

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Reply #1 on: November 16, 2013, 05:47:33 AM
Has this story been read as a podcast somewhere else? Because it sounded awfully familiar, esp. the names of the saints the author gives us.

Also, I may be thick, but I'm uncertain as to the nature of the conflict. Our Lady of the Sword was clearly acting as an enforcer of honor (and don't get me started on the inherent illogic of having a religion that *both* accepted science as God's Truth and simultaneously thought duels reflected God's will) but what was the conflict? It wasn't clear why this was a troublesome case.

Amal El-Mohtar gave a very polished, classical reading, and I liked that.



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Reply #2 on: November 16, 2013, 11:40:51 AM
I haven't listened to the story yet but I just quickly looked at the text...those ARE real Catholic saints and their respective feast days :)



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Reply #3 on: November 16, 2013, 09:33:37 PM
I haven't listened to the story yet but I just quickly looked at the text...those ARE real Catholic saints and their respective feast days :)

Some of them are, and some of them aren't...



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Reply #4 on: November 17, 2013, 12:07:31 AM
Also, I may be thick, but I'm uncertain as to the nature of the conflict. Our Lady of the Sword was clearly acting as an enforcer of honor (and don't get me started on the inherent illogic of having a religion that *both* accepted science as God's Truth and simultaneously thought duels reflected God's will) but what was the conflict? It wasn't clear why this was a troublesome case.

It seems she was put into the position of having to duel on the side that was anti-scientific truth. It seemed unclear to me, too, even after going back to skim the text, but that's the only explanation that fits her reaction. If she wins the duel, then the anti-science faction gains a foothold. If she loses, she dies (which is why she asks the head of the order if they wanted her to throw the match). Furthermore, if she loses on purpose, it's dishonorable to her own moral code. That's why the draw and double death is the only way out of the situation that preserves her honor and preserves the church's acceptance of scientific discovery.

Anyway, I loved this story, especially its structure incorporating the different saints. I think hagiography is such a blast, and historically speaking, an interesting storytelling medium, what with its larger-than-life figures and really gory iconography. It's like reading the police's crime blotter in the newspaper, except instead of criminals you get religiously themed superheroes. Aside from the dueling thing, God Herself sounds like a sensible deity, nice and pro-science. I wonder who the patron saint of speech-language pathologists would be in this world, cuz I want a medal! :D

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Reply #5 on: November 17, 2013, 09:01:17 PM
I love the story and the structure, although I had doubts about it at first. However, I need to listen to the second half again to understand her decision at the end.



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Reply #6 on: November 18, 2013, 03:01:47 PM
The character of Jeanne, the world she inhabits, the insertions of saints (be they real or be they not) weaved into the story and suburb reading by Amal made this one of my favorite podcasts.  The addition of the perfect intro just makes it all the better.

The story nicely outlines the double-edged sword that is ritual.  On the one hand, messy legal disputes are very quickly resolved.  On the other, Jeanne has to kill her opponent because of her "blasphemy" on the sacred ground.  Ritual is efficient.  Ritual is wasteful.  Ritual is kind.  Ritual is brutal.

I could blather on, but I'll just end here saying I wish to adopt St. Jeanne of the Knife as my patron saint.



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Reply #7 on: November 18, 2013, 03:19:23 PM
I was casually listening to this when suddenly I heard St. Tycho Brahe. I thought "I'm pretty sure he wasn't a saint.... oh. I see what you did there."
And then I got to thinking what an awesome world it would be if we didn't have church-mandated dark ages.(Yes, it wasn't fully the church's fault. But persecuting scientists is really bad for world-improvement.)
A lot of the story blew by me while I was thinking this, but enough sunk in that I liked the ending.
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Reply #8 on: November 18, 2013, 08:06:04 PM
I thought that was a great story.  The ending is a perfect resolution of the paradox the story presents:  How can one believe in divine justice without surrendering to blind faith?

The narration was also excellent.



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Reply #9 on: November 18, 2013, 11:01:29 PM
A duelist! I love duelists. Despite not knowing anything at all about actual fencing, I enjoyed the strange and unsettling feeling of being inside a master sword-fighter's head while she goes about her grim, divine work. The execution scene in particular was chilling.

I had a very similar "see what you did there" moment to Max e^{i pi} -- which actually created a strange tension within me. At the same time that I wanted to commend the Church for canonizing Galileo, Tycho Brahe and all the rest, but the practice of using duels to determine justice seems barbaric. Hope my case doesn't go up against Jeanne!

I suppose without the importance of duels in this society, the religion vs. science conflict and its resolution don't really work. But to be honest, I would have just as happily listened to the story of this sword saint, her trials and tribulations, her place in this strange church, without the Clausius challenge and self-sacrificial ending. I will admit I didn't initially understand why she forced a draw. I thought she was representing the pro-science side of the challenge (i.e. which was why the Ignatians recruited her). Sometimes I get distracted while listening and fill in the gaps myself.



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Reply #10 on: November 19, 2013, 04:28:31 AM
Has this story been read as a podcast somewhere else? Because it sounded awfully familiar, esp. the names of the saints the author gives us.

Also, I may be thick, but I'm uncertain as to the nature of the conflict. Our Lady of the Sword was clearly acting as an enforcer of honor (and don't get me started on the inherent illogic of having a religion that *both* accepted science as God's Truth and simultaneously thought duels reflected God's will) but what was the conflict? It wasn't clear why this was a troublesome case.

Amal El-Mohtar gave a very polished, classical reading, and I liked that.

It made sense to me ... let's see ... it was a basic tenet of the religion in this world that science is truth.  So challenging a scientifically-deduced theory on the grounds of heresy is, itself, heretical.  If "science" won, it would defeat religion.  If "religion" won, it would defeat science. Both are anathema, because the official position of the religion was, as you say, that science is God's Truth.  She chooses to have neither win or lose, thereby preserving the current belief system.

Also, I'm a sucker for stories where the protagonist kills his/herself for a bigger belief.

All that being said, it seems way too easy to topple this religion simply by bringing more spurious challenges to the dueling yard.



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Reply #11 on: November 19, 2013, 05:04:45 AM
It made sense to me ... let's see ... it was a basic tenet of the religion in this world that science is truth.  So challenging a scientifically-deduced theory on the grounds of heresy is, itself, heretical.  If "science" won, it would defeat religion.  If "religion" won, it would defeat science. Both are anathema, because the official position of the religion was, as you say, that science is God's Truth.  She chooses to have neither win or lose, thereby preserving the current belief system.
If it is as you describe, then I don't follow the logic of her choice, unless all beliefs held by the various factions of the church must be held as truth. And it's clear earlier in the story that she doesn't believe that.



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Reply #12 on: November 19, 2013, 02:47:58 PM
Ok, First I know I keep only posting about stories when they personally effect me, and Second I know you posted it on the 15th, it was my own fault I didn't listen to it till the 17th of November.

But my word you guys talking about the significance of birthdays, ON MY BIRTHDAY was creepy!



With that out of the way, I'm honestly more interested in the world of this story than the story itself.   A world where religion accepted science all along, and feminism appears to have happened long long ago, and yet they resolve conflict by having women swordfight to the death?    This world is both awesome and horrible at the same time. 

Nice place to visit, probably wouldn't want to live there.

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Reply #13 on: November 19, 2013, 04:07:39 PM
With that out of the way, I'm honestly more interested in the world of this story than the story itself.   A world where religion accepted science all along, and feminism appears to have happened long long ago, and yet they resolve conflict by having women swordfight to the death?    This world is both awesome and horrible at the same time. 

Nice place to visit, probably wouldn't want to live there.

Totally agree. I think this is what I was trying to say in my rambling comment. If this is what, say, Catholicism looks like in this world, definitely makes me wonder what the rest of the planet looks like.



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Reply #14 on: November 19, 2013, 09:20:18 PM
I'm grateful to Bounceswoosh for the explanation, because I was one of the many who got confused by this story.  The heroine's suicide did not make sense to me, because I could not figure out which side she was fighting on.  I did multiple listenings, trying to figure it out, but was still lost. 

On the other hand, I must say that I was enamored of the concept of the scientist saints and the idea of scientific truth being divine truth nearly made me swoon.  (Except then I thought: is there truth in science?  How does one *really* prove a theory?)

Except for the whole battling to the death over insults thing, this world really appealed to me.



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Reply #15 on: November 20, 2013, 08:37:35 PM
This story was very pretty and had a lot of lovely description.  Not having grown up in the religion myself, Catholicism and canonization appear absolutely mystical to my uninformed agnosticism.  The description of Galileo's sainthood is well done; perhaps that's what caused this universe to branch off from our own?  Really interesting thought experiment.

But.

I'm with those who feel that Jan's climactic conflict was a bit muddled.  I understood her urge to uphold honor, and that killing both her opponent and herself also satisfied her pride, but the exact actions and thought processes were difficult to track.  Also, at that last battle, it occurred to me that we didn't have much world building to explain why fights like this were settled with sword duels. Unless I missed something.  By the end, while the swordfights were also pretty, I'm afraid they felt tacked on, too.



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Reply #16 on: November 21, 2013, 05:39:34 PM
I enjoyed listening to this story because of the reading, but the thinking about the worldbuilding really messed with my brain. 

This is a world where the church accepts science as God's Law, canonizes people who ask uncomfortable questions, yet resolves disputes by claiming that individual skills and actions do not determine  the outcome of a swordfight. Strange.

In the end, of course, it's Jeanne's use of her free will that actually settles the matter, thus putting her in charge of the outcome.






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Reply #17 on: November 21, 2013, 08:03:57 PM
In the story of this world there is no dichotomy of god's law versus science.
Look at it this way. God made the laws of nature and they govern the universe. Maxwell's equations are the word of god. Newton's laws of motion are god's law. And so on and so forth.
And just like god's word is perceived as a bunch of fiendishly difficult differential equations, it can also be perceived by the swing and slash of a sword.

I used to look at how people would resolve issues and questions of righteousness via a duel as rather stupid and downright crazy. How is someone's skill in swordplay or quick-draw any way to resolve a question of morality?
But in a universe where god is seen as acting through the well-defined and understood laws of nature, it works. During the course of the battle there are thousands of variables and millions of outcomes. Things that people have no control over: wind, loose stones, the sun coming out from behind a cloud or a spectator leaning just right to reflect the sunlight. But if the universe you live in is governed by god's word via science, then the outcome of the battle is known only to her. And she will make sure that the right person wins. Perhaps with enough supercomputers and knowledge of all the variables you could work it out, but that would take too long.

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Reply #18 on: November 22, 2013, 03:09:44 PM
I happened to be listening to this story at night while driving to a friend's new house out in the country down several unlit and poorly marked country roads.  I was having to give a lot of attention to my navigator and my attempts not to miss any poorly marked turns (and end up like the guy in The October Witch).  So, when the story started taking some of its cool turns, it really threw me.  "Wait?  Saint Galileo?  Oh, alternative reality.  Neat.  But then what have I missed so far?  Were those other people all really Saints . . . ?" Then Suddenly: IN 1 AND A HALF MILES, TURN LEFT ONTO HIGHWAY 210.

All of which is to say I like a nice complex story, but I really need to give this one another listen to do it justice.  :)



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Reply #19 on: November 22, 2013, 04:00:32 PM
I think Max nailed it here. That's how I interpreted things. One thing I really liked was the inclusion of the saints' little wiki bios, not for the bios themselves, I honestly spent most of the story wondering what the point was of the different holiday breakdowns. Then we get the last one, about Jan, and I went "Aaahhh, I get it. Very cool."

As a religious person myself, my beliefs are fairly close to this tale in that I believe God created science and works through science for the most part. So this society is not a far stretch for me at all. I have no desire to instigate a religious debate here, I'm just saying this worked for me.

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Reply #20 on: November 25, 2013, 05:13:17 PM
This is a story I would have loved to like - little vignettes about the saints, alternate history about religion - but the story was just too subtle for me to really like. Coming to think about it, maybe it doesn't work in audio that well.



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Reply #21 on: November 25, 2013, 05:31:50 PM
Perhaps with enough supercomputers and knowledge of all the variables you could work it out, but that would take too long.

Nope.  The Gospel according to Saint Heisenberg says nuh-uh.


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Reply #22 on: November 26, 2013, 03:48:49 AM
I liked this story quite a lot and really enjoyed the protagonist here. She seems pretty awesome, though I think I'd find her intimidating in real life.

I don't really get the whole "the duel will reveal the truth" thing, but then I have the same issue with the myriad stories that use mortal combat as a means of determining a person's guilt or innocence. Game of Thrones, for instance. Thus, that is only one negative in a story full of interesting ideas and compelling storytelling.

Perhaps with enough supercomputers and knowledge of all the variables you could work it out, but that would take too long.

Nope.  The Gospel according to Saint Heisenberg says nuh-uh.

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Reply #23 on: November 26, 2013, 07:39:17 AM
Perhaps with enough supercomputers and knowledge of all the variables you could work it out, but that would take too long.

Nope.  The Gospel according to Saint Heisenberg says nuh-uh.
Not quite.
The Gospel according to Saint Heisenberg states that as you increase the accuracy of your measurements of one quality, you decrease the accuracy of another. Specifically: you can either know the path or the exact position of high-energy particles at any given time to a high degree of accuracy, but not both.
But what we can know is a probabilistic trajectory of high energy particles based on statistic calculations of the "probability cloud".
A probability cloud is exactly that, a cloud of particles, where any one particle is the "real" particle. Everything else is a virtual particle. Those virtual particles are the result of the statistical analyses of the high energy particle. The cloud is quite thin around the edges, but rather dense in the middle. That means that with a very high degree of certainty, the particle you are looking for is in the exact center of the probability cloud.
How about a duel?
Well, that's very interesting. See, Saint Heisenberg's gospel concerns particles on the atomic scale. Humans, swords, hawks and even dust particles are all significantly larger than, say, an electron.
There are of course parameters on the atomic scale that might perhaps influence the outcome of the duel. But statistically speaking, those influences are negligible. And if you still want to account for them? You can calculate them to a very high degree of certainty (as explained above) given a powerful enough computer and enough time to input all the parameters and do the calculations.

Heisneberg's uncertainty principle is very cool and is often the poster child for "look guys, science can't do everything!", but that's just plain out wrong.
Scientists are not deterred by having to reduce their calculations to statistical analyses (in fact, when calculating orbital mechanics for anything more than two bodies at a time they use statistical models, and they do that just about every time they launch an interplanetary probe). You can check here for some practical everyday uses of it.
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Reply #24 on: November 26, 2013, 09:31:59 PM
Thank you for this delightfully ambiguous story in which neither the church nor science is presented in black or white hats. Maybe slush reading has imposed a selection bias, but it's refreshing to see the church presented as something other than an evil force.


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Reply #25 on: November 27, 2013, 12:30:51 AM
I loved this story. One thing I really liked was how the author negotiated between tweaking so many elements slightly, but retaining a lot of the cultural and historical feel of Catholicism and Catholic history. I also found the way this world treated gender fascinating. The story could have conceivably been written with a male main character, but there were times that the difference in the way this world viewed gender struck me pretty hard. God is referred to as female, women are seen as fighters equal if not superior to men, and, although prostitution is still viewed as a dirty trade, Jan's origins don't hamper her employment by the church as much as one would expect. I think the story did a good job exploring the culture that surrounds martyrdom, where a saint's death is revered almost as much as the saint's actions in life, if not more. Jan's suicide seems to be both a matter of pride and a matter of spirituality. It seems like a pointless waste to me, but I can't deny that, in her culture, it is a powerful act.



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Reply #26 on: November 27, 2013, 01:52:12 AM
Just read a relevant quote that I'll paraphrase. "Science is the search for God. It just comes at it from a different angle than religion."

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Reply #27 on: November 27, 2013, 06:28:26 AM
Just read a relevant quote that I'll paraphrase. "Science is the search for God. It just comes at it from a different angle than religion."

I just don't agree.

Science is a search for fact. If you think that the combined sum and total of all facts equals God, well, so be it.

I'm not sure how many would agree with that, however.



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Reply #28 on: November 27, 2013, 11:49:41 AM
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Science is a search for fact. If you think that the combined sum and total of all facts equals God, well, so be it.

I think this approach is actually very recent, relatively speaking. A significant amount of the motivation for early scientists -- certainly the people recognised as founders of modern scientific knowledge and inquiry -- was spiritual in nature. As late as the 19th century scientists and innovators were also occultists, and the occult nature of their interests sometimes directly led to their discoveries. Think of how much easier it is to invent the telephone when you can conceive of spirits with whom you can communicate beyond the grave.

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Reply #29 on: November 27, 2013, 12:15:22 PM
Perhaps with enough supercomputers and knowledge of all the variables you could work it out, but that would take too long.

Nope.  The Gospel according to Saint Heisenberg says nuh-uh.
Not quite.
The Gospel according to Saint Heisenberg states that as you increase the accuracy of your measurements of one quality, you decrease the accuracy of another. Specifically: you can either know the path or the exact position of high-energy particles at any given time to a high degree of accuracy, but not both.

Yes, we all operate using classical Newtonian physics pretty well and it could be used to describe each dodge, thrust and parry without the unnecessary complications of either quantum mechanics or relativity.  But I do believe that the accumulation of trillions and trillions of subatomic particles/waves have an impact on the bigger world.  The alternative is a universe that is pre-determined, and that just doesn't sit right with me. <--- Very scientific statement   

But I do agree that the Uncertainty Principle gets thrown around as some kind of a unscalable  brick wall when it's not, and I'm guilty of doing so in this thread.  In reality, it defines just how fine a resolution we can focus in on.  It's a universal limit, just like light speed...without warping space anyway.  And that is life in a nutshell...ya gotta work with what ya got!

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Reply #30 on: December 02, 2013, 04:58:01 PM
The classic conflict of Science vs. Spirituality is one that I've never really understood.  If I had to call myself anything I'd say I'm an Agnostic Theist, but also a scientist.  IF God created the universe, there is nothing about scientific discovery that changes that.  The conflict really seems to arise when new scientific discoveries contradict long-held beliefs of a specific religion, but that has always bugged me because surely discovering new aspects of the universe is just a fine-tuning of our conception of the plan. 

Much like I've never really understood conflict of Science vs. Magic.  They are not incompatible.  Science is a process by which to understand the workings of the universe, however those workings happen to function.  If magic exists, science would catalog its form and function.

Anyway,regarding the actual story:  it took me a little while to figure out that this was an alternate list of saints, particularly the mentions of Galileo.  I wasn't really that interested in the saint list until then, nor particularly interested in the protagonist who was so focused on her function as to be a non-entity, the blade which she is titled with, and not very interesting.  I've always thought it bizarre than anyone could be satisfied with a duel as a means of determining rightness, because it seems like it should be obvious to any thinking being that the outcome means nothing but that one person beat the other.  But I guess if you believe in God guiding every action, one could extend that to believe this, even though I don't really fathom it.  The story really got interesting at the very resolution of the story where she actually proved herself to be a thinking entity rather than a tool in the hands of others by making a decision for herself.  That made the story pretty worthwhile, even though it took almost the entire story to get there.  Overall, though, since it did take so long it's not a story I'd be likely to recommend to others.



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Reply #31 on: December 04, 2013, 08:40:31 AM
I liked this story without really understanding what was going on. Like other commenters, I found the idea of dueling for honor silly and pointless, especially in a world where science is the word of God. I also really don't get how all this would work, religious teachings alongside scientific fact, but I am an atheist, so I admit my ignorance here.

What made this enjoyable were the little snippets of the saints' feast days (especially once they started getting unusual) and the excellent reading.

A small nitpick/question: if the main character's name is Jeanne (assuming I heard it right), why do they refer to Saint Joan of Arc instead of Jeanne d'Arc?



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Reply #32 on: December 04, 2013, 05:37:22 PM
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A small nitpick/question: if the main character's name is Jeanne (assuming I heard it right), why do they refer to Saint Joan of Arc instead of Jeanne d'Arc?

I wondered that myself while reading! One was written Joan of Arc, the other was written Jeanne. I rationalised it to myself with the thought that Calendar snippets are from a different (English?) society observing the feast days and customs, so Jeanne D'Arc has been anglicised due to the historical distance while Jeanne of the Knife is a recent enough addition that her name is what it is.



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Reply #33 on: December 04, 2013, 06:23:08 PM
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A small nitpick/question: if the main character's name is Jeanne (assuming I heard it right), why do they refer to Saint Joan of Arc instead of Jeanne d'Arc?

I wondered that myself while reading! One was written Joan of Arc, the other was written Jeanne. I rationalised it to myself with the thought that Calendar snippets are from a different (English?) society observing the feast days and customs, so Jeanne D'Arc has been anglicised due to the historical distance while Jeanne of the Knife is a recent enough addition that her name is what it is.

Makes sense to me.



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Reply #34 on: December 05, 2013, 09:24:50 AM
Makes sense, yes. I also thought that maybe Jeanne does live in an English-speaking country, but her parents were creative and decided to give her a French name :)
(I like thinking about things like this. It's pretty fascinating the way names of cities or even countries change when "translated".)



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Reply #35 on: December 05, 2013, 03:15:51 PM
Makes sense, yes. I also thought that maybe Jeanne does live in an English-speaking country, but her parents were creative and decided to give her a French name :)

I've seen the name Jeanne in various forms enough in the US that it doesn't strike me as a foreign name.

(I like thinking about things like this. It's pretty fascinating the way names of cities or even countries change when "translated".)

Yes!  We've been running into that at work.  We're on the verge of releasing a new product targeted at European markets.   There's a region selection control which has "Germany" as one of the selections.  But someone sensibly pointed out "You know that anyone who should be selecting that value would be calling it "Deutschland", right?  Um, yeah, good point.



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Reply #36 on: December 06, 2013, 01:29:39 AM
I'm late to the party, but I just listened to this story and i have to say that I was disappointed in the end. The story was good in the sense that it pretty much ruined my day--I spent all day trying to understand why the MC would do what she did, so the story accomplished its goal by sticking in my brain and making me think. In the end, it just wasn't my cup of tea. I can't really put a finger on why, but... I just didn't like it. Maybe because I was expecting the sword to start talking to her or perhaps I wanted something more, but it felt like the MC copped out for some reason.

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Reply #37 on: December 09, 2013, 11:18:53 PM
In my head, this story was taking place in the world of Neal Stephenson's Anathem, or one very like it.
That just added to the cool of both.



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Reply #38 on: December 10, 2013, 12:29:54 PM
I really enjoyed the world and the writing.  If you enjoyed this, then I recommend both "Swordspoint," by Ellen Kushner, which avoids the anticlimactic nature of final duels by having a plot that just sort of meanders around pointing at interesting tourist attractions in the worldbuilding and then stops at a semi-arbitrary point, and the King's Blades series by Dave Duncan, which is more swashbuckly but has some interesting and amusing takes on the idea of (in this case magically) sworn weapon-wielders.  (The idea tangentially appears in one of my favorite series, "The Silent Tower" and "The Silicon Mage" by Barbara Hambly, but I can't recommend those to fans of swordfights.  I do enjoy the sworn-weapon character in that series, though, and his eventual resolution.)

I was as confused as most other people when it came to who was arguing what side of which argument in the duel in question.  The explanation of challenging a scientific principle as heretical in a religion where scientific principles are God-ordained truth makes sense and clarifies why she went for the tie answer (or at least why she wanted to lose the fight in the first place, with the tie being her way around her pride.)  I have a creeping fridge-logic feeling that there's no way to make this a coherent religion, though, not with the way science is always overturning and/or refining theories as our understanding refines itself.

I was pleasantly surprised at the female pronoun applied to God, but then I went, "Wait, why would a female Deity be hung up on the purity and chastity of women?"  That's strictly a male concern, just from an evolutionary perspective, even without the accreted cultural baggage.  Not sure if that was just a whoopsie-let's-not-change-society-TOO-too-much-lest-the-reader-collapse-from-novelty-fatigue thing or something that the author just didn't notice.



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Reply #39 on: February 19, 2014, 06:23:47 PM
Way, way late to the party.

Unfortunately, not being that much into science, I didn't catch onto the special nature of the saints until I heard St. Galileo, which made me wonder: wait, were all the saints scientists? Now I'm going to have to go back and listen. I did like this world, although like many, I too was a little unclear on her final duel. But I love the idea of this world and how this world is built on science being God's truth. And after that recent debate on science vs creationsim (which I found both sides to be ridiculous; more interested in talking past each other without having a genuine conversation) I found this story a refreshing twist on that debate. Definitely a world I would love to revisit.

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