While I liked the story, I felt like we might have been left wondering too much about what this grittier, seedier side of being a modern veteran looks like. It wasn't quite the 'wanting more' feeling, thought it might not be a huge leap to getting there. I just felt like this may have been as tightly distilled a 'short story' as one could make from something larger, and it left me feeling like there was just parts, details, tidbits, missing.