Hmmm....
I liked the character in this one. And the description of her relationship with her fiancee was cool.
But... I feel like I missed something here. Apparently he gave her the wedding dress as a way for her to explore and bypass her own wedding. But... why even arrange all the wedding stuff if both the bride and groom take action to avoid the marriage happening? Why all the ceremony, all the world attention, all the talk of alien races uniting in marriage, and then whoosh oops it didn't happen.
For much of the story, she also just seemed... kind of confused. She kept asking variations of "How did I end up here?" and along this line there seemed to be more questions than answers, somehow. Maybe it was just meant to be pre-wedding jitters, but there was enough of it that I started to really question she is of sound mind, whether she has been hypnotized or mind-wiped or something. Was I the only one? Was that supposed to be the impression?