Someone was looking for this story in the forum and it caught my eye. I'm a sucker for this particular monster so I had to give it a listen right away.
The tension is set right in the beginning, when the girl--Fay--asks if Richard is going to kill her like he did with all the others, he says no, and the dialog tag is He lied.”
It says that the man that attacked her before was a “biter”. Man, I wish I’d walked in without knowing anything!
The theme is very similar to
Ginger Snaps (2000), a Canadian movie: Richard mentioning the girl’s “cycle” and her timing and pads, and also her attitude at the beginning... The fact that the author is also Canadian makes me believe that it was certainly an inspiration. The podcasters talk about this in the commentary (but won’t mention the title of the film, for some reason).
It would be a good enough story even
without the twist. The twist just gives it a nice aftertaste: the villain got what he deserved. I wished that last scene was extended a little though.
Oh, and Richard's desire for menstruated girls is a deviation that actually exists. It's called riparophilia. Don't google it.
« Last Edit: August 20, 2021, 11:06:55 AM by Álex Souza »
I just wanna go pro before AI takes over and the bot dogs from Boston Dynamics kill us all.