I was very happy to see Silky McRapeface (ie. Arachne) get hers in the end. And her little city, too. Ok, maybe that was a bit excessive, but you know... gods. They're gonna do what they're gonna do. After you're done rebuilding your city and burying your children, try to elect some archons who don't abuse the laws of hospitality, ok? Zeus doesn't approve of that shit.
I was a little frustrated by the main character's lack of drive, action, or clarity. It takes a lot for a story to hold me if it's about the main character gearing up for action - in fact the only other story to pull it off is the Series That Must Not Be Named, which weirdly enough also involved a little rape - and I don't think this story quite pulled of it off... but then again, it didn't categorically fail. I was a little bored, but I didn't turn off the story and listen to the radio instead, so I can't roundly condemn it. I just think that the long middle section where Ann is struggling against incoherency and lassitude could have been handled a bit better.
The one thing that really bugged me was actually the worldbuilding. I mean... are people with random godlike magical talents just that common around here? It seemed that everyone who learned about Ann's power was just "oh, yeah, that's cool, I wonder how we can manipulate you." Nobody was like "holy shit - zombies!?" And when Ann learned that Spiderbutt MacConsentissues had the power to weave magic cloth and steal life from people via sex, she was just... vaguely intrigued. If the world was that weird, well... I would have liked to see it hinted at elsewhere in the story. You know "the city you came from was destroyed, just like the city that was destroyed by a rain of flaming flatware twenty years ago." Something to give me an idea of where these powers fit into the setting.
Overall, though, a fun listen. Not quite as good as I hoped it would be from the intro, but fun.